Wednesday, December 11, 2019

TWK1 d2 a1 SLJ

2 comments:

  1. Good work on this post Lucas, I like how used metaphors and similes to describe her.
    Keep it up
    Molly

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  2. Hi there!

    My name is Matilda and I work as a blog commenter for the Summer Learning Journey this year! You made such a good start during the teaser week! Awesome work! We have noticed that you haven’t done any activities for a while. Our finish date is the 24th of January but there is still time to give it a go and start gaining some points!

    This post is so good! I thought it was very clever! I really enjoyed reading it. It looks like you spent a lot of time thinking of these similes! My favourite is she flies like a bullet!

    The Summer Learning Journey has heaps of activities to choose from! Here is the link. Have a look through and find some activities you like the looks of. I’m looking forward to seeing which ones you choose! (There are some activities quite similar to this one that I think you would be really good at!)

    https://sites.google.com/site/summerlearningjourney/weekly-activities

    Remember if you have any questions all you have to do is ask!

    Can’t wait to hear from you!

    Matilda :)

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Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments.