Friday, May 31, 2019

The skatepark

Over a couple of weeks for writing we could pick a place in Greymouth and find out the history around it I picked the Skatepark .
I enjoyed putting pictures  in because I could find the pictures and make my book look cool.   
I found finding the history hard because when I was looking  up stuff  it would come up with nothing.
My NSL is to use punctuation and present tense.   



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  2. Hi Lucas

    I enjoyed reading your book on the skatepark. It's great that you were able to write and learn about a place that you find so interesting and that we spend alot of time at. I found out lots of things I didn't know about the skatepark too.

    You did a great job using book creator and I like the way you experimented with colors and backgrounds to make it look interesting too.

    I agree with Miss Kaye, just remember to slow down and proofread your work before publishing as little spelling mistakes distract from your hard work.

    Keep up the great work, I enjoy reading your blog.

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